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Like a man-eating plant
Capturing a fly,
I’m sucked into this world
With nothing left to do but cry.

So much pain,
So much sadness,
Many left out in the rain.
What is this world coming to?
Please, could somebody explain?

A life that is better,
Much better than most.
But still I feel empty and unaccomplished,
Like a ghost.

She calls for attention,
But does anyone see?
She wishes to help others
Professionally, for a fee.

But how can she help others?
She can’t even help herself.
She’s stuck and she’s lonely,
Attempts to display her feelings on a shelf.

We call out to be noticed,
Could you lend us a hand?
We feel so out of it.
Please, please try to understand.
©2005-2009 ~oddspongeout
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Author's Comments

I've been writing SUCH MOPEY AND STUPID POEMS LATELY. ARGH.

You'd think I have SAD.

It's snowing right now. I'm full of glee. I wasn't when I wrote this, but yeah. XD

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nice poem mads. I think you have real talent!

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November 28, 2005
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